(*) Tornado Night (*)
Air you can seeBy light you can smell,Then sound you can feelAs it rumbles from Hell;Taste the ozone,Listen to doomAccost your every senseAs you cower in your room;Be afraid -- this is not God,Or a...
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Thanks Nageea!This was inspired by a picture on another board -- awesome tornado in the night, illuminated by a huge bolt of lightening.There was some discussion as to content; thought I'd try it here...
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Do you live in tornado alley perchance? Well, I do and you certainly nailed it! As a lifelong Kansan I can definitely relate to the words so perfectly expressed in this poem. Good job!serenepoetress
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Hi RG!Other opinions, yes, but also just the freedom to be able to say something about my own poem without being spanked, you know? We were onto (I think) an important point about this poem, before we...
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Found it! Which ending do you like better?Air you can seeBy light you can smell,Then sound you can feelAs it rumbles from Hell;Taste the ozone,Listen to doomAccost your every senseAs you cower in your...
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